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Dawn is an excellent editor.  She has provided me with in-depth explanations for changes to the materials I have given her.  She’s pointed out where I need to spend more time addressing the quest of my protagonists, embellishing the introductions of each section with more description of people and location, and anchoring my flashbacks.  Her style is direct and tactful while honoring my communication efforts with kindness. Overall her advice is not only helping the readability of my manuscript, but also improving my writing skills.  In addition, she is genuinely interested in the message of my novel.  This translates to multiple-level support which I truly value.

–  Linda Pardo